(How about a little scansion diminishing meter? line two is hendecasyllabic )
The Days of our childhood fade into random memories
A black and white film in my mind plays frames of
Bowling, snow ball fights, and hopping fences
That movie plays in my thoughts and dreams
Over and over again, with a trembling smile
That disguises the deeper sadness inside
Over and over again, with a trembling smile
That disguises the deeper sadness inside
Is that you tapping me on my shoulder?
Like Hermes the winged messenger
Whispering that it’s ok for you now
Like Hermes the winged messenger
Whispering that it’s ok for you now
Are you traveling the cosmos?
Exploring, Seeing, Moving
Freely amongst the stars
Exploring, Seeing, Moving
Freely amongst the stars
When we meet again
We’ll sign the book
Together this time
We’ll sign the book
Together this time
I can feel you now
Watching us
Waiting
Watching us
Waiting
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Well done.
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